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Write a Screenplay That Opens Doors

A 30-day course that takes you from idea to finished, revised screenplay using the Belief Cycle System™: a character-driven process for building structure, scenes, and rewrite from the same story engine.

Breakthrough Script™ has 200+ video lessons. 20+ hours of training. The Herd community. Lifetime access

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5-Star Rating

The class helped me gain confidence in finishing my Feature Film and knowing exactly how to structure it correctly. I would 10/10 recommend Keren’s classes to anyone who asks. Well worth the investment.

- Zanle L.

5-Star Rating

This course pushed me beyond my comfort zone, awakened new perspectives on writing and sharpened my skills beyond a level I had thought was possible.

- Annamarie C.

5-Star Rating

I went into the classes having never written anything resembling a script before. And I came out of it so proud of the work I had produced and excited to write more.

- Christie B.

TESTIMONIALS

What others are saying

"I feel so empowered having taken this class."

" I took the class being like, "Okay, let's see what I can do, and let's challenge myself," and I left it with like, "Oh my gosh, I can actually go and see this come to fruition"." - Charisse Uy

"I recommend this, I really do."

"  I'm really happy for taking the course, because without it, it would still be an idea. It would still be sitting in my head. But now I've got something out" - Antony Guscott

"I know I have jumped ahead many years from doing Breakthrough Script"

"  The framework that, I've learnt in the Breakthrough Script, has been really awesome in helping me build a really full world with deep and complex characters." - Rachel Papprill

"It really does cover everything you need"

" Since I did Breakthrough Script, I have done nine scripts in total, that I would be unembarrassed to show anyone and, that would never have been possible if I hadn't had the training that I got." - Lyn Collie

A Promising Idea Isn’t Enough If the Script Doesn’t Deliver

A strong idea can open the door, but the script still has to carry the story.

Too many writers get stuck somewhere between an exciting concept and a draft that actually works. And even when they finish, the feedback often sounds painfully familiar:

“Promising idea, but the execution isn’t there yet.”

That usually does not mean the idea is bad.

It means the foundation is not fully connected yet. Character, theme, structure, scenes, dialogue, and rewrite are being treated like separate problems instead of parts of the same story engine.

That’s when the same issues start showing up again and again…

No Reliable Roadmap

You sit down to write, but at some point the story starts to stall, wander, or feel like a string of disconnected events. You know the idea has potential, but you’re not sure what should happen next or why.

Flat Characters, Unclear Theme

You get feedback that your characters feel thin, the emotional arc isn’t landing, or the story “isn’t really about anything.” But no one gives you a concrete process for turning character, theme, and structure into actual scenes on the page.

Pages That Don’t Yet Read Professionally

You finally get to FADE OUT, but the script still doesn’t read like the ones you’ve been studying. Scenes drag, dialogue feels too on-the-nose, action lines are overwritten or underpowered, and you don’t have a clear rewrite process to elevate the draft.

And that is why more screenwriting advice is not always the answer.

Without a clear method, writers can spend years writing draft after draft, trying to reverse-engineer what works from movies they love, conflicting advice, and disconnected screenwriting systems.

It starts to feel like writing a stack of scripts that never go anywhere is the hidden cost of learning the craft.

But it doesn’t have to be.

Introducing

BREAKTHROUGH SCRIPT™

Breakthrough Script™ is a complete screenwriting course that takes you from raw idea to a professionally formatted, structurally sound, elevated screenplay draft that you can send out with confidence.

Build the foundation. Map the transformation. Write the draft. Then rewrite it with purpose.

WHAT MAKES THIS DIFFERENT?

This is Not Just Another Screenwriting Formula

Most screenwriting advice teaches the craft in pieces:

structure, character, theme, scenes, dialogue, and rewriting as separate skills.

But a screenplay has to work as a whole.

 

Breakthrough Script™ gives you an integrated system

where every part of the story connects.

Everything

Connects

Character, theme, structure, scenes, dialogue, world, drafting, and rewrite are not treated as separate pieces. You build them from the same story engine, so the screenplay feels unified instead of forced together.

Structure From Character

Instead of squeezing your story into a formula, you build the plot from the protagonist’s wound, false belief, goal, pressure, and transformation, so the structure grows organically from who the character is.

Belief Cycle™ Tracks Change

The Belief Cycle shows how your protagonist’s false belief is challenged, tested, cracked, and either transformed or refused across the story, giving you a clear map for emotional and structural movement.

Six-Layer Beat Sheet Gives Direct Path to Draft

You don't just list what happens. You build each beat through theme, subplot, wound, false belief, scene mapping, rhythm, and world, so every scene, every moment has a reason to exist.

Rewrite Built-In

The course doesn't stop when you type FADE OUT. You move through a 20-pass rewrite process that helps you revise from big-picture structure down to dialogue, visuals, and polish.

By The End of the Course

By the end of the 30-day course, whether you complete it in 30 days as a focused writer or move through it at your own pace with lifetime access, the goal is the same:

  • A professionally formatted, structurally sound, revised and elevated screenplay draft you are proud to send out.

  • The kind of draft that could get you noticed. The kind of draft you can send to contests, fellowships, representation, executives, producers, or trusted industry readers with confidence.

  • Breakthrough Script™ is designed to help you build a solid, professionally crafted draft that will help you get to the next level on your screenwriting path.

Breakthrough Script™

Our Curriculum Includes...

The Belief Cycle System™

You'll know exactly how to create a plot and structure that organically comes from your character, not added on to it.

The Belief Cycle System™ is present in all stories, from Little Miss Sunshine to The Dark Knight and Everything Everywhere All at Once. When your protagonist's internal logic drives the external story, everything clicks into place. We give you a framework you can apply to every screenplay you write from now on.

A Proven Path To FADE OUT

Never again feel lost in your script and wondering what you should do next. Every step of the process is laid out for you, from your first idea through your final revision.

Breakthrough Script™ is a 30-day course with 200+ video lessons (20+ hours) that walk you through the complete screenwriting process: concept, character development, scene construction, structure, and a 20-pass revision system that helps you refine your first draft into something you’re proud of and ready to send out.

Course Feature

A Writing Community

Writers need writers. The Herd is there to give feedback and encouragement, as well as providing direct access to Keren and our other instructors when you have questions.

There’s something about knowing other people are at their desks at the same time you are, working through the same process. And when you watch how another writer solves the same structural problem differently than you might have, it expands what you think is possible.

Course Feature

Bonus Content

What happens after FADE OUT?

Writing a great screenplay is one thing. Getting it into the world is another. Beyond the Script is a complete post-draft resource covering everything you need to put your work in front of the right people, including: loglines, synopses, one-pagers, and query letters that get read.

Module 2 takes you even further with: how to pitch verbally in a room, how the industry landscape works, what to do with contests and fellowships, how to find representation, and what it looks like to build a career writing screenplays.

Course Feature

Optional: AI Writing Partner

You do not need to use AI at all to take Breakthrough Script.

The entire course is designed to get you to a solid draft without ever touching AI.

BUT... for the AI-curious writers who want to use AI productively and responsibly, the course includes an optional AI Writing Partner.

It is trained specifically on the Breakthrough Script™ methodology and will not write for you. Its job is to help you think deeper, ask better questions, pressure-test your concept, characters, world, structure, and scenes, and notice what may or may not be working while you are in the process.

The writer still leads. Always.

Course Feature

Limited Time EARLY ACCESS OFFER

Start now, lock in the lowest price, and get lifetime access.

Act Now!

The US$149 Early Access price is a one-time offer for this launch window. Once Early Access closes, this price goes away permanently.

When you join now, you lock in lifetime access to Breakthrough Script™, including future course updates, at the lowest price it will ever be offered.

What you get with Early Access:

  • Immediate access to the orientation videos

  • Full access to Phase 1 content immediately

  • Access to The Herd community

  • The optional AI Course Writing Partner plugin

  • Lifetime access to the entire course

You do not have to wait for the official launch to begin. You can get inside now, start building your story foundation, and begin working through Breakthrough Script™ before the full public release.

Course Feature

Get Early Access for US$149

The Breakthrough Script™ Curriculum

Phase 1: Development Foundations

Purpose: Build the story engine before you start drafting, so your screenplay has a clear premise, protagonist, emotional spine, and thematic direction.
 
Deliverable: A complete development foundation for your screenplay, including your idea, logline, protagonist, wound, false belief, thematic truth, antagonist, supporting cast, world, voice, and core story materials.

What you’ll build: The character, theme, world, and premise foundation your entire script will grow from.
  
Click pull-down arrow on right to view days 1–7

Day 1: Why story matters; how screenplays are different from other forms of writing; screenplay format and what goes on the page; where ideas come from and how to elevate them

Day 2: The Brain Dump: exhaust every thought you have about your story before you start shaping it; loglines and the C.D.O.G. formula; the RISE feedback method and your Herd community; marketability

Day 3: Character as transformation: the function of story; The Wound and False Belief System; Thematic Truth; The Four Traits

Day 4: Action lines: what they actually do; the craft and rules; Show Don't Tell in practice; writing action lines for your specific character; going deeper on your protagonist

Day 5: Dialogue: what it does and how it works; the technicals; subtext and conflict; building distinct character voice; your character's goal, what they consciously want

Day 6: You’ll build your antagonist and supporting cast through the Thematic Spectrum, so every major character pressures, reflects, challenges, or distorts the protagonist’s false belief.

Day 7: World: every story has one; locations that build your story; the rules of your world; expressing theme through environment

Phase 2: Structure

Purpose: Turn your foundation into a transformation map that connects character, theme, plot, subplot, scene movement, rhythm, and world.
Deliverable: A Six-Layer Beat Sheet that shows how your story unfolds through the Belief Cycle System.

What you’ll build: A clear structural roadmap for your screenplay, so you know what happens, why it happens, and how each major turn pressures your protagonist to change.
Click pull-down arrow on right to view days 8–15

Day 8: Character arc and the journey of change; Need vs. Goal; pressure and how change actually happens; structure serves character; introduction to the Belief Cycle

Day 9: The Belief Cycle™ in depth; Section 1: Ordinary World with False Belief; Section 2: Challenge to Belief. applying and tracking both sections across story examples

Day 10: Section 3: Testing Belief in a New Context; Section 4: The Midpoint; Belief System Shows Cracks. applying and mapping both sections

Day 11: Section 5: Eyes Beginning to Open; Section 6: Crisis -- the Belief System Fails Completely; anatomy of a crisis. applying and mapping both sections

Day 12: Section 7: Action Without Agenda; Section 8: New Belief in Action (or Refusal). Completing the full Belief Cycle map for your story

Day 13: What a beat is; beat sheet fundamentals; But/Therefore causality; translating the Belief Cycle into your first-pass beat sheet

Day 14: Subplots: what they are, how to weave them in, supporting characters as subplot engines

Day 15: Applying all Six-Layers to the beat sheet: layering sequence, scene maps, rhythm, visual details, and supporting characters into a complete structural blueprint

Phase 3: The Vomit Draft


Purpose: Move from planning to pages with momentum, using your structure as a guide without getting trapped by perfectionism.
 
Deliverable: A complete first draft of your screenplay, written section by section through the full Belief Cycle.
 
What you’ll build: The full draft of your story, from opening image to FADE OUT, with a clear path through each major movement of the screenplay.

Click pull-down arrow on right to view days 16–23

Day 16: Writing Section 1: Ordinary World with False Belief. Troubleshooting: the Placeholder Method, on-the-nose dialogue, exposition through action, when your beat sheet changes mid-draft

Day 17: Writing Section 2: Challenge to Belief. Troubleshooting: pacing your scenes, scene transitions, staying creative within structure

Day 18: Writing Section 3: Testing Belief in a New Context. Troubleshooting: tracking multiple characters, subtext layers, action line clarity, the writing vs. editing distinction

Day 19: Writing Section 4: The Midpoint; Belief System Shows Cracks. Troubleshooting: writing the midpoint, placeholder discipline, managing subplots, tracking belief state

Day 20: Writing Section 5: Eyes Beginning to Open. Troubleshooting: writing vulnerability, updating your beat sheet mid-draft, exposition overload, the temptation to revise, when the story feels broken

Day 21: Writing Section 6: Crisis - The Belief System Fails Completely. Troubleshooting: writing the crisis, supporting cast in the darkest moment, pacing emotional sections. Halfway celebration.

Day 22: Writing Section 7: Action Without Agenda. Troubleshooting: writing the transformation, climax vs. resolution, thematic payoff, the final push

Day 23: Writing Section 8: New Belief in Action. First Draft complete celebration. What to do with your placeholders. Draft exchange with Herd members. RISE feedback at draft one. Week 3 close and Week 4 preview.

Phase 4: The 20-Pass Revision System

Purpose: Revise with a clear, layered process so you are not just making the script different, but making it stronger.

Deliverable: A revised and elevated screenplay draft, strengthened through twenty focused passes across structure, character, theme, scenes, dialogue, visuals, and polish.

What you’ll build: A professional rewrite process you can use to diagnose, strengthen, and elevate this script and every script you write after it.

Click pull-down arrow on right to view days 24–30

Day 24: Macro Passes

Pass 1: Theme Integrity Check

Pass 2: Protagonist Transformation Mapping

Pass 3: Antagonist Architecture

Pass 4: Supporting Character Constellation

Pass 5: Emotional Arc Tracking

Day 25: Structure Passes

Pass 6: Chain Analysis (But/Therefore throughout the full draft)

Pass 7: Tension Architecture

Pass 8: World as Character

Day 26: Character Depth, Part 1

Pass 9: Wound-to-Wisdom Tracking

Pass 10: Relationship Dynamics

Day 27: Character Depth, Part 2

Pass 11: Character Traits Check (Four Traits on the page)

Pass 12: Voice Authenticity and Expression

Pass 13: Choice Escalation

Day 28: Dialogue

Pass 14: Subtext

Pass 15: Monologue Moments

Day 29: Visual Storytelling

Pass 16: Symbolic Consistency

Pass 17: Show Don't Tell Audit

Day 30: Final Polish

Pass 18: Genre Expectation Balance

Pass 19: Rhythm and Tone

Pass 20: Final Wordsmithing

Day 30 ends with: YOU HAVE A PROFESSIONAL FIRST DRAFT, ready to share with managers, agents, producers, contests, and fellowships.

This Course is For You If...

  • You have a screenplay idea you cannot stop thinking about

  • You've started scripts before but struggle to finish

  • You have written scripts that are not getting the feedback or response you hoped for

  • You want to understand how character, theme, structure, scenes, and rewrite actually connect

  • You want a clear system you can use again for future scripts

  • You are willing to do the work and build the writing muscle

  • You want to finish with a draft you are proud to send out

This Course is Not For You If...

  • You are looking for a shortcut.

  • You want to passively watch videos and have a script appear.

  • You want AI to write the screenplay for you.

  • You are looking for a guaranteed sale, representation, or produced credit.

  • You already have a polished, send-out-ready draft and are not looking to rebuild or revise.

  • You're specifically looking for TV only training. Keep an eye out for our Pitch & Pilot course coming soon!

Meet Your Instructor

Meet Your Instructor

My name is Keren Green, and I’ve been on every side of the screenwriting journey.

 

I’ve worked with writers who have never written a screenplay before, who don’t know the format, the structure, or where to begin. And I’ve worked with writers who have already written one or more scripts and are convinced they understand story, even when the feedback keeps telling them something still isn’t landing.

 

I know both of those places because I’ve been there too.

 

I loved movies. I had strong instincts. I had ideas I believed in. But in the beginning, I didn’t have craft. And because I didn’t understand the craft yet, my ego got in the way of the feedback I needed to hear.

 

I'd tell myself:

 

They don’t get it.

 

They’re missing what I’m trying to do.

 

They just don’t understand the story.

 

But the truth was harder and more useful: the scripts weren’t doing what I needed them to do yet.

 

That was the turning point for me.

 

Because falling in love with your own writing can be dangerous when you don’t yet have the tools to make the story work for other people. A screenplay is not finished because it makes sense in your head. It has to move, build, pressure, reveal, and land on the page.

 

Screenwriting is a craft. And learning that craft is what allows other people to fall in love with your story too.

 

For me, everything shifted when I finally let go of defending the work and committed to understanding how story actually functions: how character drives plot, how pressure forces choice, how theme moves through action, and how structure is not a formula you impose on a story, but a framework that reveals what the story demands next.

 

I went back to school. I earned multiple degrees in creative writing for entertainment. I worked with top producers, including Oscar-winning teams, who pushed my work hard because I was finally learning how to meet the professional bar. And, eventually, I earned my way into the Writers Guild of America West.

 

And the response to my work changed.

 

I used to walk into meetings bracing myself for the notes. I would tell myself it was okay if they hated it, okay if they tore it apart.

 

Then, slowly, the conversations became different.

 

People started saying things like:

 

“We love this script.”

 

“The door is always open.”

 

“We’d like you to develop this for us.”

 

I found myself pitching to companies I had once only imagined being in the room with. Opportunities started to open, not because I had magically “arrived,” but because my scripts were finally doing the job they needed to do.

 

But my understanding of story did not stop there.

 

Over more than twenty years of teaching, mentoring, workshopping scripts, and evaluating projects from the other side of the table, I started seeing the same patterns again and again.

 

Beginners were not struggling because they lacked imagination.

 

Experienced writers were not struggling because they lacked talent.

 

They were struggling because no one had given them a clear, character-driven process that could carry them from idea to finished screenplay.

 

So I began testing, teaching, refining, and synthesizing what actually worked. I watched where writers got stuck. I watched where their stories started to break down. I watched what helped them move forward again.

 

Over time, a system emerged.

 

A process that keeps character, theme, structure, scenes, drafting, and revision connected from the start. A process that can guide a writer from the first spark of an idea all the way through to a completed, polished draft.

 

That process became the foundation of Breakthrough Script™.

 

This course is for beginners who know they have stories to tell but don’t know where to start. It’s for writers who can reach FADE OUT but still don’t understand why their scripts aren’t landing. And it’s for writers who are ready to start building stories that work.

 

You do not need to be touched by the muse.

 

You do not need to have read every book, watched every YouTube video, or written ten bad scripts before you write a good one.

 

You just need a process that works.

 

A clear map you can follow from idea to structure, from structure to draft, and from draft to a polished screenplay you are proud to send out.

I had to learn this the hard way but you don't have to. If you are willing to show up, stay open, and do the work, I know how to guide you through this process because I found my way and I’ve helped many other writers find their way through it too.

 

You’ve got this.

 

Let’s write your script.

Ready to Build Your Screenplay From Idea to Draft?

Breakthrough Script™ gives you the system, structure, tools, and rewrite process to take your screenplay from raw idea to a professionally crafted draft you are proud to send out.

The US$149 Early Access price is the lowest Breakthrough Script™ will ever be offered.

Join now to lock in lifetime access, start Phase 1 today, and build your screenplay on a foundation that works.

Frequently Asked Questions

Do I need any prior screenwriting experience?

No. The course begins with the fundamentals: format, mindset, the core tools, and builds from there. If you've never even opened screenplay software before Day 1, you'll have everything you need. If you have experience, Phase 1 is a chance to deepen your understanding rather than just review basics, because the framework you'll build everything on, the Belief Cycle System, is likely new regardless of your background.

How long does the course take?

The course is structured as 30 days. However, you can move through it at your own pace. Some people will complete their screenplays in 30 days while others may decide to go slower. Both ways work. But constant motion is the best way to complete a screenplay, so whatever time commitment you make, stick to it and you'll get it done. Phase 1 builds your tools, Phase 2 builds your blueprint, Phase 3 asks you to write fast, and Phase 4 takes you through revision. Momentum is a real thing in screenwriting, and this course is designed to protect it.

How much time should I set aside each day?

Most students spend 1–3 hours per day on the course, depending on where they are in the process and personal schedule allowances. During the vomit draft phase (Phase 3), writing 12–15 pages per day requires a meaningful block of uninterrupted time, but by the time you get there you have a solid map, so it is speed writing without over-thinking or pausing. Ultimately, you set your own schedule, but the daily commitment is real to write a feature-length screenplay.

Do I need Final Draft or specific software?

Any screenwriting software works. Final Draft, Fade In, Highland Pro, WriterDuet, or other options. Day 1 covers formatting so you'll know what you're looking at regardless of the tool. If you're using free software, you're fine. One of our orientation videos covers multiple options.

Is there a guarantee?

Absolutely! Breakthrough Script™ has a 7-Day Satisfaction Guarantee. If you are not completely SATISFIED and ENLIGHTENED by the Breakthrough Script™ Program, then contact us within 7 Days for a full refund, no questions asked!

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DISCLAIMER: Writing progress, creative breakthroughs, and industry/career success discussed in the  Breakthrough Script™ depend on many individual factors including commitment, effort, prior experience, and personal circumstances. Results shared on this page are from real students and are not a guarantee of your experience or outcome. Keren Green and Tenacious Cow make no promises or warranties regarding specific results. This course is for educational purposes only. If you’re not willing to accept that, please DO NOT PURCHASE The Breakthrough Script™ Program.